Episode description: What will you do when
you cross the path with not one but two bad boys? And which one will win over
your heart?
Synopsis: In this story you play as the
beautiful daughter of a fashion designer mom, Bella, who just transferred
schools. In her new school Bella meets Hailey, a girl with sas who helps her
get through her first day and explains some social rules of the school. Then
Bella also meets the schools two hottest and most popular guys, who,
unfortunately don’t have a really good reputation. Relationships are out of the
question, since these two are sworn playboys and live by it. When these two
make a move on the protagonist, drama is bound to happen!
So…is this story any good, you ask?
It’s hard to say yet, since only the
first three episodes are available right now and they really only form the
start of the story. The startup is a bit slow and the theme ‘bad boys’ isn’t
very original, but I believe a lot of drama is yet to come, so if drama,
trouble and multiple love triangles is your thing, Bad Boys could be the story
you’re looking for…
Other than that, I believe the story
directing and usage of sound are really well done for a first story. So the
author doesn’t really need to excuse herself for this at the beginning of the story
😉. There is just one thing that
bothered me at the beginning, which was the repetitive door-closing sound after
Bella comes home. Also I don’t think the whole ‘I-am-sorry-but-you-can’t-customize-in-my-story’-thing
at the start of the story is necessary. There are a lot of great stories that
don’t do customization, so don’t be sorry, be confident instead!
Every story has its ups and downs,
no story is perfect, but all serious writers like Melia deserve to get some
attention for the hard work they do writing and directing them! So please, if
you’re into stories like Melia’s Bad Boys, support her by reading her story and
if you really liked it, don’t forget to recommend it to fellow readers 😊.
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